the greenhouse effect

Essay topics:

the greenhouse effect

The diagrams give information about the basic mechanism of the greenhouse effect on the temperature of the Earth.
There are three stages in the procedure that the greenhouse affected on Earth, flowing the level of greenhouse gases, become with the increase in temperature on the surface of the Earth to the Global warming.
At the beginning of the process, when heat radiation from the sun come to the Earth, 6 percent of it is scattered from the atmosphere and clouds restrain about 20 percent of heat radiation out of the Earth. Meanwhile, there are 19 percent absorbed by the atmosphere and the clouds so the Earth is warmed. Because the increase of greenhouse gases generates. When greenhouse gases rise into the air, they trap and reflect heat from the sun to make the Earth more suitable for life.
At the third stage in the process, the increase in pollution makes generating more greenhouse gases so the Earth becomes warmer as a result of the heat is trapped and reflected by increasing the emission and greenhouse gases.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'percents'?
Suggestion: percents
...t of the Earth. Meanwhile, there are 19 percent absorbed by the atmosphere and the clou...
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Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and the clouds so the Earth is warmed. Because the increase of greenhouse gases genera...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, third, while, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88068181818 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65096246946 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.847739305 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.714285714 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251894762836 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139620701586 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109899826112 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192049368776 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908416590273 0.0819641961636 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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