With the diverse educational system running in the society, some persons are under the impression that co-education is beneficial while, others believe that single-sex tutoring is the best for pupils. Although, they both have their advantages and disadvantages, I am of the opinion that mixed schooling is the best.
Mixed schooling helps build the social skills of child. These skills include communication and confidence and they can only be enhanced in an environment they encourages exposure because the constant presence of the opposite sex in a learning space will improve help it. For example, as a girl in high school, I found it difficult to fit into gatherings that involves boys because I was attending an all girls high school and therefore I was not exposed to such meetings. While, my friend could easily blend into such gatherings. However, exposure has it’s negative effect on pupils in this learning category as it could lead to sexual exploitation at an early age.
On the other hand, same-sex education aids concentration in pupils thereby curtailing all avenues for distraction in their academics. Reproduction was one of my favorite topics in biology and being that we were all girls I did not feel shy or make noise when the details of our reproductive system was explained. However, this tutoring method brings about timidity. When pupils find themselves in mixed meetings the tend to loose their voice or shy away.
In conclusion, the merit of a mixed-gender school outweighs that of a single-gender as it builds a child both academically and socially.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'encourage'
Suggestion: encourage
...only be enhanced in an environment they encourages exposure because the constant presence ...
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Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ore I was not exposed to such meetings. While, my friend could easily blend into such...
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Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir academics. Reproduction was one of my favorite topics in biology and being tha...
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Line 5, column 414, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...upils find themselves in mixed meetings the tend to loose their voice or shy away. I...
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Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...hemselves in mixed meetings the tend to loose their voice or shy away. In conclus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93949001127 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635658914729 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6087939772 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.083333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135004917079 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428690379202 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322227407563 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750268384737 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255467606759 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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