Global warming simply refers to the rise in temperature of Earth’s climate system which is mainly caused by human influence. In recent times, it has become a major global issue as it is affecting the various continents. This climate change has affected the sea levels causing it to rise by melting the ice in the Arctic sea and reduction of ice in Antarctica. The change in weather patterns has led to extreme weather conditions such as monsoon, tornado, tsunami, expansion of deserts etc.
However, many factors are said to cause climate change but mainly human activities. Some of the human activities that influence global warming include firstly, energy emission that is gases emitted from cars, planes etc. Secondly, green house gases: industrial revolution such as factories, power stations has increased the amount of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere. Thirdly, land usage is also a cause. For example, a change from a dark forest to grassland makes the surface lighter causing more reflection of sunlight. Finally, aerosols and soot which are man-made pollutants left at sea by ships while navigating it.
Consequently, a few measures from both individuals and government can help curb this world issue. These measures include mitigation by the reduction of greenhouse gas emissions or the enhancement of the capacity of carbon sinks to absorb greenhouse gases from the atmosphere. Furthermore, adapatation to the expected climate change for example, coastline protection and development of more resistant crops by individuals without government intervention. Finally, climate engineering that is the deliberate modification of the climate can help tackle this issue.
In conclusion, countries should come together to join the UNFCCC to help work out these few measures to control global warming.
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- Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nado, tsunami, expansion of deserts etc. However, many factors are said to cause ...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...ate change but mainly human activities. Some of the human activities that influence global ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49110320285 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89989079956 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580071174377 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0292576126 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.866666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178352105753 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544962894025 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533686500809 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978224004951 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264239092199 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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