"The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large. "
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations or reading.
After World War I the influence of capitalism encouraged many corporations to enter into the market. This was accompanied by many nations turning towards mixed or purely capitalistic economies. Thus corporations became one of the major players in a nation's well being. Such private corporations usually have only one goal that is to maximise profits and there have been a large number of cases where the corporations follow bad practices to achieve their goals.
A really good example would be the food market, let us take a case study of KFC one of the most prominent food chains. This food chain is known for chicken which has pretty high demand. KFC to maximise profits would require a large number of chickens on daily basis, this requirement would never be met with the chickens normal reproductive rate. Its only made possible with some great research in growth and reproduction enhancement drugs for the livestock. These are actually dangerous, they artificially speed up the lifecycle of a chicken using drugs which would be indirectly consumed by the people, resulting in adverse effects on their health.
On a similar note the dairy industry uses drugs to artifically enhance the amount of milk produced by the cows, which cause alarming health effects, infants who have a fragile immunity system fall prey to this. There have been cases where doctors have suggested the use of milk for their children for their harmful effects.
Hospitals can be another important case study, In developing countries like India where most of the good facilities are only available in private institutions, medicine becomes one of the easiest ways to make profits. Thus hospitals have really high prices and because there is no other alternative makes the lives of lower-middle-class people miserable as they can't afford basic medical needs.
Corporations when uncontrolled in a mixed or a capitalistic setting would be a menace to the people if they are not moderated by the nation in terms of what ways they can capitalise profits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...mixed or purely capitalistic economies. Thus corporations became one of the major pl...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...r-middle-class people miserable as they cant afford basic medical needs. Corporati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, really, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 333.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11111111111 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79162363722 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.711720257 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.571428571 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0800693473123 0.243740707755 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293513335418 0.0831039109588 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231614569305 0.0758088955206 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0391417497247 0.150359130593 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031197077569 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.