Genetic modification, a process used to change an organism’s genes and hence its characteristics, is now being used to improve trees. Through genetic modification, it is possible to create trees that produce more fruits, grow faster, or withstand adverse conditions. Planting genetically modified trees on a large scale promises to bring a number of benefits.
The author claims that planting genetic modified trees whose
characteristics have been improved intentionally by human, has some significant
beneficial; hence the article provides three main benefits for that. On the
contrary, the professor is firmly of the belief that despite of the fact that
they are lucrative, there are some negative attributes about them and
repudiates all the notions provided in the article.genetically modified trees
are more tolerable than nature trees; hence, the can be designed to survive in
severe conditionals. However, the lecturer rejects this idea by explaining that
modified trees may are strengthened to survive in a specific condition. While,
there are plentiful attributes like weather and insects and so on effecting on
trees. Accordingly, by altering the conditions may most of natural trees are
perished; meanwhile, some of them can survive. Notwithstanding, all modified
trees will be disappeared because of being uniform. In addition, the author avers that planting modified trees would be beneficial owing to provide more fruits and benefits to funders.
Nevertheless, the professor contends this method by reasoning that by changing
weather and unforeseen conditions all modified trees will wipe out; hence, three would be dramatic cost for investers to recover the farm asserts that utilizing modified trees
demands foor wood would be supported easily. On the other hand, the lecture
refutes this hypothesis by arguing that exploiting wild trees native people can
provide their demand without paying money; otherwise, they should pay every
time they want to cut a modified tree because planting and fostering of this
species needs money and fundation. hence, it will not be appropriate substitute
for people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Beneficial
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...it will not be appropriate substitute for people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 269.0 270.72406181 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74721189591 5.08290768461 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93997757926 2.5805825403 114% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591078066914 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.0505426537 49.2860985944 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.6 110.228320801 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 21.698381199 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06452816374 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.09492273731 488% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124798953995 0.272083759551 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548270831107 0.0996497079465 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291172082995 0.0662205650399 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0377427897762 0.162205337803 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360894313201 0.0443174109184 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.3589403974 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.8541721854 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.0289183223 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.2367328918 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.42419426049 118% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 63.6247240618 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.7273730684 186% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.2008830022 179% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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