As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Human's use technology to complement and enhance themselves. Technology has become a central part of the human condition for positive and negative effects. I believe that as people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the human's ability to think of themselves will surely deteriorate. In the twentieth century, technology plays an important role in the constitution of human nature and identity. In our modern era, technology has become an inherent part of scientific investigation and diagnosis. For example, the emergence of innovative technology, "Robotic surgery" in which many operations were adapted from the open surgery to the minimal access technique. Physician performs surgery on a patient even though they are not in the same place. Maybe a doctor had a mission for medical project in another city, so he or she has the ability to do surgery. Robotic surgery is expected to cut recovery time. The patient can be discharged from the hospital sooner. A doctor typically works very long hours; the technology could save a lot of time for doctors to expand their knowledge, skill, and performance. They have time to offer a good standard of practice and advising patients on how to stay healthy. Physicians have enough time for reading technical medical journals, spent hours on education, and conferences.
Another example, having access to computers in the classroom is beneficial and improves student learning. When student use an iPod, laptop, and computer to do their homework, greatly expand their academic growth. Using academic software can help students develop their strong points. These students exponentially increase their options for creative growth. Computers allow the most of the student of many age groups to think about developing artistic skills in photography, film-making, drawing and, design. They learn how can inspiring by software computers to create a specific art, such as Photoshop software challenging their brain how can they draw imaginary or real models for special locations or events.
While using technology can be valuable, some of them can be ignored. Most of the world's population has a smartphone. They could call their friends every time and they are almost always available, so it will expect to improve relationships, but unfortunately, most of them prefer to be alone and just connect with the social network. They spend less time going to a restaurant with their friends or colleagues or take part in group activities, so the risk of developing Alzheimer's disease in most societies. One of the reasons is, people are engaging in smartphones too much and avoiding themselves from real social life. They are living in virtual life that technology and internet access is providing for them. Alzheimer's causes memory problem and people may become disoriented for a time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...re on technology to solve problems, the humans ability to think of themselves will sur...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hours on education, and conferences. Another example, having access to comput...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...models for special locations or events. While using technology can be valuable, ...
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Line 9, column 82, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...ome of them can be ignored. Most of the worlds population has a smartphone. They could...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2405.0 1615.20841683 149% => OK
No of words: 452.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32079646018 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88059214486 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566371681416 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 760.5 506.74238477 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8225297322 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.73076923077 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208333890185 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578420149226 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972577253493 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129306558836 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887580538981 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 78.4519038076 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.