As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take.

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As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position

Human use technology to complement and enhance themselves. Technology has become a central part of the human condition for positive and negative effective. I believe that as people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the human's ability to think of themselves will surely deteriorate. In the twentieth century, technology plays an important role in the constitution of human nature and identity. In our modern era, technology has become an inherent part of scientific investigation and diagnosis. For example, the emergence of innovative technology, "Robotic surgery" in which many operations were adapted from the open surgery to the minimal access technique. Physician performs surgery on a patient even though they are not in the same place. May be doctor had a mission for medical project in another city, so he or she has ability to do surgery. Robotic surgery is expected to cut recovery time. Patient can be discharged from hospital sooner. A doctor typically works very long hours; the technology could save a lot of time for doctors to expand their Knowledge, skill and performance. They have a time to offer a good standard of practice and advising patients on how to stay healthy. Physicians have an enough time for reading technical medical journals, spent hours on education, and conferences.

For Another example, having access to computers in the classroom is beneficial and improve student learning. When student use iPod, laptop, and computer to do their homework, greatly expand their academic growth. Using academic software can help student develop their strong points. These students exponentially increase their options for creative growth. Computers allow the most of the student of many age groups to think about developing an artistic skills in photography, film-making, drawing and, design. They learn how can inspiring from software computer to create a specific art, such as, Photoshop software challenging their brain how can they draw imaginary or real model for special locations or events.

While using technology can be valuable, some of them can be ignored. Most of the world population has smart phone. They could call their friend every time and they are almost always available, so it will expect to improve relationship, but unfortunately most of them prefer to be alone and just connect with social network. They spend less time going to a restaurant with their friends or colleagues or take part in group activities, so the risk of developing Alzheimer's disease in the most society. One of the reason is, people are engaging in smart phone too much and avoiding themselves from real social life. They are living in the virtual life that technology and internet access is providing for them. Alzheimer causes memory problem and people may become disoriented for a time.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...re on technology to solve problems, the humans ability to think of themselves will sur...
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Line 3, column 454, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'skill'?
Suggestion: skill
...s to think about developing an artistic skills in photography, film-making, drawing an...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tware computer to create a specific art, such as, Photoshop software challenging ...
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Line 3, column 717, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... model for special locations or events. While using technology can be valuable, ...
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Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ues or take part in group activities, so the risk of developing Alzheimers diseas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2399.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 455.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27252747253 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82684698581 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564835164835 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 764.1 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.455176569 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2692307692 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.73076923077 5.21951772744 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210129824843 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585906474968 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920206626989 0.0758088955206 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131315787867 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823057383046 0.0667264976115 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 100.480337079 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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