Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, whiles others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Various organizations promote their products by funding sports. A significant number of people believe it a beneficial; however, others do not agree and consider it has negative sides. Before reaching to a conclusion, this essay will discuss both the aspects in following paragraphs.
To begin with, financial aid to sports is the good way to encourage people to take part in games especially in developing nations, where scarcity of sports budgets are high. For instance, many nations cannot take part in world level games because of lack of funds from the sports management in these nations. Hence, these countries lack the spirit of development in sports and effects athletes badly. Therefore, financial support from companies can give these players platform to fight in games and help in the growth of sports in that particular nation.
However, sponsors can also take advantage of this deal by including out of standard products in the market. Sports player style and trends are mimicked by billion fan followers without verifying it. For example, Lionel Messi is the most popular footballer around the world currently; therefore, tagging bad quality football brands with him can convenience people to buy these footballs without having a second thought. As a result, football manufacturing companies can increase their sale in large markets of soccer lovers such as Brazil without improving quality of products.
To conclude, while sponsoring sports by manufacturing units can boost the momentum of the nation as well as the athletes in wealth deprived countries, I believe it has a drawback and people should be careful before purchasing any item from the market.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... without improving quality of products. To conclude, while sponsoring sports by ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...re purchasing any item from the market.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34962406015 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73278017997 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62030075188 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3697792138 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.583333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14915653524 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523219295617 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352255957123 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854655467 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204503445619 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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