The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Obesity issues are making things complicated for the health institutions. In order to control this scenario, a significant number of individuals believe that the superlative way to solve such problems is to incorporate more sports classes in school syllabus. Although the physical education will prevail the youngsters from obesity issues by doing regular exercise. I am of the opinion, that awareness and intake of a proper diet in this modern world is necessary to get rid of fatness problems.
However, food intake has a major role to play in the fitness of an individual. These day’s people eat junk foods which are high in calories and cause problems for them, especially young generations and the students who stay alone. Ready-made food available in the market save time of these learners in cooking, consequently, they prefer to eat ready-to-eat meals and neglect the concept of healthy food while staying away from home. Therefore, awareness of food consumption is necessary to avoid fitness issues in future.
On the other hand, increase in physical lessons will force people to do exercise on regular basis, which latter will benefit society by having more physically fit people. Addition of physical lessons in school system will involve more and more people to acquire knowledge of sports and exercise. For instance, physical education learning by all the students irrespective of their background will boost the momentum between young individuals and open more career options for them.
In conclusion, while sports classes will involve more students in school learning and benefits them in terms of their fitness level. Whereas, control of diet intake and consumption of food in the right manner is more important to have more healthy individuals in the society. Hence I believe that awareness on diet limits is better way to improve the graph of the health care system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...more sports classes in school syllabus. Although the physical education will prevail the...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...on is necessary to avoid fitness issues in future. On the other hand, increase in physic...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ore healthy individuals in the society. Hence I believe that awareness on diet limits...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23355263158 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71444968673 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536184210526 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.504391386 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.642857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184431920479 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669674484064 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478428146604 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11184645249 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444302520268 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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