You had just missed a friend’s party, write a letter to apologise.
In your letter, you should:
· apologise to your friend
· explain why you couldn’t attend the party
· tell her what steps you will take to avoid missing it in the future.
Dear Maria,
I'm writing to feel sorry for not making my presence at your birthday party. I know you worked hard to make all the arrangements to make this party a fun-filled event for everyone and It was my bad to miss it.
Unfortunately, there was a mix-up with my phone calendar and accidentally, I had set a reminder for the week ahead, so I was in the impression that the party is on next Friday. I know that the use of technology makes our life easier but in my case, it just worsened. Also, I regret not picking up your calls on the same day you were expecting me because my phone was on silent mode. But trust me it was unintentionally. I wanted to be a part of that celebration but I didn't due to this mistake.
I hope that you will forgive me this time and I'll be careful in future while setting such reminders. I've sent you belated birthday wishes with fresh flowers. Hope you'll like that.
Please accept my apologies.
Best wishes,
Ell
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Maria, Im writing to feel sorry for not making my...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to be a part of that celebration but I didnt due to this mistake. I hope t...
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Line 9, column 470, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...to be a part of that celebration but I didnt due to this mistake. I hope that y...
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Line 13, column 47, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... that you will forgive me this time and Ill be careful in future while setting such...
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Line 13, column 102, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...in future while setting such reminders. Ive sent you belated birthday wishes with f...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...irthday wishes with fresh flowers. Hope youll like that. Please accept my apolog...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57303370787 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61197290844 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651685393258 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9269526913 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8333333333 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149630850425 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454485251501 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046900322496 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822301578543 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525608293118 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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