Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Technology has become such an integral part of our lives that there are instances when we forget that it is actually technology that has made a certain tasks so simple. It has become so obvious that we dont realize how certain things would exist without the availability of technology. It would be foolish to think of a world where there are no phones, no aeroplanes or cars.
Therefore, saying that technology makes our lives more complicated would be wrong.
We are in an age where everything has become dependent on technology, right from getting Robots for house cleaning to be able to be able to do some complex calculations at work or to be able to order our favourite mc burger through a vending machine, technology has become an important part of daily lives.
We can not imagine if we would be able to perform certain task if it wasnt for technology. Taking an instance of home autmation through the use of Alexa, where you can switch on or off a light while you are still in your bed or you can listen to a good song or book a taxi while you are still in shower, things have rather become simpler.
Huge amount of data-content gets created in our daily lives becuase of the presence of social networkimg sites like Instagram, Facebook, and in order to be able to manage such great amount of data, it is important we have better resources so that everyone is able to access the data with convenience. To better manage this content however organized or disorganized it is, we have come up with innovatiove ideas such as big data or cloud computing which helps us in storing the data without any hurdles.
People are able to get the food delivered at their doorstep, they dont need to go to the bank to do their daily transactions, they are well connected with the outside world and get the real time news feed. This all can now be done with just a click of a button in our smart phones.
However, no matter how much depedent we become on technology it is important that we be extra cautious while using the latest technology. It is very easy to get fooled if you do not understand the technology well. For example there have been instances where hackers have misused the data available and some fraud people on the pretext of being from banks have been able to extract the information from people in a wrongfull manner.
People are becoming lazy as they get a readymade meal available at their doorstep, they do not get up to do household chores as they have robots to do these things.
Putting these few disadvantages aside and being extra cautious, we technolgy has actually proves to be bane.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2155.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 468.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6047008547 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55033340035 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482905982906 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 697.5 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.4730912312 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.6875 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.25 23.4991977007 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13960217954 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509403552814 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524140314426 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0655259529229 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589824900473 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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