The table below give information on the proporion of carbohydrates, protein, and fat in three different diets.
The pie charts given below illustrate on the comparison of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.
In general, carbohydrates is higher proportion in three different diets while the second enrolments is protein.
To begin, from carbohydrates amount up to 60% of the healthy diet for sports. This is 10% lowest than the proportion of carbohydrates in a normal healthy diet and 20% more than in average diet. While people who eat an average diet consume at healthy diet just 30% and diet for sports is 25%.
On the other hand, the compound shown in the charts is fat. Fat relative exactly make higher of both the average diet and the healthy diet (20%), but the one fifth to only 15% for the healthy sports diet.
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- In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting universities studies.Discuss the advantage and disadvantage for young people who decide to do this. 56
- The charts below show US spending patterns between 1966 and 1996 67
- The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010 56
- The table below give information on the proporion of carbohydrates, protein, and fat in three different diets. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, while, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 605.0 965.302439024 63% => OK
No of words: 127.0 196.424390244 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76377952756 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35699682299 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63385532526 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566929133858 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 175.5 283.868780488 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4036796306 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.4285714286 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145479522767 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996939338609 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149321303955 0.0843802449381 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163829425617 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170215980536 0.0819641961636 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 40.7170731707 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.