Discuss both sides of Space travel vs. Current crucial problems faced by humans?
Space travel has been made huge contribution to the growth of technology. However, it also has brought some social hindrances to the community. But, while some people think that the benefits of space travel outdo the drawbacks, others believe otherwise. In my opinion, space travel has brought more benefits than problems to the society.
To commence, thanks to the space travel, nowadays is possible to communicate with everyone around the world. Scientists had to devise computer to become able to travel around space. Besides computers, satellites came to contribute to communication as well. Therefore, nowadays being everywhere is possible to be in touch with families and friends.
However, it is said that the environment is being ravaged so as to become space travel possible. People say that each following day the nature is being devastated and this is contributing to the lack of natural resources. But if we see the benefits in a large scale, we can see that it is possible to generate renewable resources, one example of this would be renewable energy that is happening in some countries in Europe.
Finally, as it was stated in this article space traveling brings more benefits to people rather than it undermines them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 202.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13861386139 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79250488294 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569306930693 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1744659598 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.25397266985 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152315128818 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656698562415 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588001851338 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096347094388 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459602561371 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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