Grandparents take care of children when their parents are out at work.
These days, it is global concern that parents are much busy in their work and do not get the enough time to take of their beloved child. So,when parents are not available children care is conducted by grandparents. However, this situation has both pros and cons. In the essay, I will discuss some of the benefits and some of the challenges to be overcome.
Let's begin by looking into the advantages of grandparents. Firstly, in the age of teenage mostly children are emotionally attached with their grandparents because they are spending more their time with them. To illustrate with, if any problem appears to a juvenile related to their life or friend, then in most of the cases they share with their guardians. Another, benefit is guardians are more aware of historical places and culture of the country so they elaborate with their off springs in terms of story for making their children sleep. Also,they have vast knowledge of success stories; consequently, this will encourage teenagers indeed to succeed and become useful adults for community.
Turning to the flip side of the coin, some of the grandparents could have lack of knowledge and intelligence of contemporary technologies and also what education is needed further. As a consequence, in this notions parenting skills are inevitable. For instance, if children is interested in sport, then what kind of latest equipments to wear, type of security in all this parents role influence on youth. What is more, on deciding of how much packet money should juvenile need according to the situation parents have a crucial role in this.
All things considered, although it is common belief that only parents are responsible for upbringing children but grandparents have a impact solemnly. Therefore, I believe according to the situation, nurturing of off springs should be taken.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, for instance, kind of, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14950166113 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82994081685 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584717607973 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5908247226 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271020403281 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814990574603 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862568031429 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15500221578 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751851015716 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.