You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took
place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that
they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served
for lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
say what the participants liked about the hotel
explain why they were unhappy about the food
suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Prabhjot, an employee in Tata Consultancy Services. Last Monday, our company organised a one-day meeting with our Europe clients on the premises of your renowned hotel. I am writing this letter to inform you that the participants have shared overall positive feedback about their visit to the hotel except for the quality of food they were offered.
There are a number of points marked in the praise of the hotel. First, the hospitality provided by the courteous staff was remarkable. They were all quite humble and guided the participants about the meeting schedule. Moreover, they took better care for their timely meals and other necessary requirements. Secondly, clients were extremely impressed by the cleanliness of the hotel area which lead to their comfortable stay.
Nevertheless, despite many positive reviews, there exist one negative as well. Our clients did not like the cuisines offered in the lunch, as it contained the excess usage of oil and salt. Additionally, there was not a single European dish of their taste which left many of them hungry.
In order to work on these feedbacks, I suggest you hire some professional chefs who can prepare a variety of food, especially for the important events. Also, add some additional cuisines of different countries on the menu to meet the demands of foreign visitors.
I hope my suggestions receive your agreement and will look forward to your prompt actions.
Yours sincerely,
Prabhjot Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23553719008 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72474212672 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673553719008 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.472920129 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4666666667 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1333333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358835460298 0.216113520407 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089533352511 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735546229305 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152713021485 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105949345222 0.0580467560999 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 41.2886597938 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.