Immigration has a major impact on the society.
What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?
Write at least 250 words.
People from one country move to other country for various reasons such as purse jobs, living a better life and civil war in their own nations. Society is facing a most important effect because of immigrants’ movements to their country. Firstly, this essay will list the key reasons of immigration. Secondly, this essay will discuss the possible outcomes of immigration.
To begin with, it is widely accepted technology makes our world more connected. Every nation wants to bring talented students and job seekers around the global to serve and work in their country. Wealthy countries encourage youngsters by offering high paid salaries also provides permanent residence. Additionally, in some nations due to financial stability and internal battle, millions of common people being killed. To overcome this United Nations requested many neighboring continents to give a life to refugees.
On the other hand, due to culture differences and non-adaptation of rules, polices and laws are the major threatening consequences because of immigration's. Recent riots between immigrants from Bangladesh and West Bengal Indian citizens on religious is one of the major negative impacts in recent time. To prove that, the Standford University had picked two years old refugees and done many surveys on various sectors like traditional, politics, common policies. The results show that 80% of people still going through problems in adapting and setting the situations. Although proper sessions provided to the refugees, still it is challenging issue for many countries.
To conclude, Immigrants should give back positivity to the nation which has given a better life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51953125 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86125013226 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6796875 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6748825436 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.2 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0879825360418 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0254650675243 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359471136897 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533466064182 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315895280455 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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