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Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Use specific reason and details to support your choice.
Livings in a modern apartment and a traditional house have advantages and disadvantages. I confuse if I must choose where I live because both of them equally interest. In the following paragraph I will analyze both these options and present my view.
From the one side, living in apartment has benefit. First of all, if we stay in there, we can get prestige because apartment is modern house in 21st century and there are easy to buy something like food or drink because apartment usually has modern market and coffee shop. However, living in apartment has a few losses, people who live in there ha...
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because both of them equally interest
because both of them are equally interest
traditional house have more benefit than apartment
traditional house has more benefit than apartment
with price that is same to buy apartment
with price that is the same to buy an apartment
Sentence: Living in traditional house, we can socializing because people who live in there usually make organization to make maintain mutual their live like make organization to save environment.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present participle or gerund
Suggestion: Refer to can and socializing
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to mutual and their
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Different Words: 132 200
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 261 350
No. of Characters: 1205 1500
No. of Different Words: 132 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.019 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.617 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.602 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 78 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 56 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 37 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.077 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.809 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.403 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.61 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.196 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5