Teaching is a novel profession and generally teachers are highly respected in a society. In our childhood we both fear and respect our teachers. With the advancement of technology, life and society has been tremendously changed by this time. A controversial question which is often raised is that whether teachers are respected and valued by society today compared to the past. From my perspective I believe that in most cases teachers are somewhat neglected in society. Essential and persuasive evidence will be provided in the following paragraphs to verify my judgement.
Whenever I think of teacher of my childhood time, I see a learned person who dedicated his life to pass his knowledge to the students. In past, only the best scholars were selected to be a teacher. In rural areas, where there are one school for ten villages on average, erudite persons were like a gems in the then society. Therefore, when a person gained enough knowledge and motivated to be a pedagogy, it was much appreciated in the society. However, things have been changed a lot today and now teaching becomes a job like other professional sectors. People without much knowledge or dedication might get involved into this profession. This situation gradually decreases faith and respect on them.
In addition, another important factor contributes to degradation of teaching profession. In this competitive world, people always look for money and salary becomes a key factor while choosing any career path. As salary has not been increased proportionally compared to other sectors, educated people get frustrated and do not find it attractive to pursue career in teaching. Moreover, many teachers are now getting involved in unethical ways to make money. For instance, in my city, private coaching centers are rising fast and some teachers always try to force students to get private coaching rather than learning in school. Therefore, inadequate salary and greediness of some people causes humiliation of this novel job.
Last but not least, with the advancement of technology, people can get educational resources online free of cost. Thus, one might think that it is easier to learn something using online resources. Due to contribution of experienced persons of each sector, it is now needed to get help from a professional teacher. Consequently, students do not feel the importance of teacher in their life, as they can get every resources online. In our childhood, it was not as easy as it is now and at that time we could not make any progress without support of our teachers. Therefore, we are much grateful to our teachers to help our growth.
To wrap it up, I must say that a novel profession like teaching has been deteriorated due to many reasons. Sadly, teachers are not much respected and somewhat neglected in currents society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
... to pass his knowledge to the students. In past, only the best scholars were selected t...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a gem' or simply 'gems'?
Suggestion: a gem; gems
...s on average, erudite persons were like a gems in the then society. Therefore, when a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2371.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1099137931 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88065781886 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515086206897 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 748.8 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.44000737 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.8148148148 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1851851852 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85185185185 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119724802755 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324474925094 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379306426607 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632475259657 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312155901074 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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