Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear Mr Koto,
Hope you are doing well.
let me introduce myself first. I, Sharmistha Naskar, have moved to this location and joined your gym recently as it seems to be classy apart from other gyms. I am penning down this letter to let you know about few current unhygienic habits which may affect your heath badly.
let's come to the issues we have to tolerate from last couple of weeks. it is found that member of this gym is not at all maintaining machines at the end of the day. Through out entire day, more than 100 folks are accessing all equipment, keeping in mind various skin problems gym should take care of it. Apart from that, when metals coms in the contact of sweats then reactions happens in different forms. Along with that, we have noticed that people are leaving used towels on the benches which is creating problems for next person. Due to this unacceptable habits, people are not able to access those machines. this may result to lose people from your gym.
I would like to suggest some valuable points in order to keep entire system healthy and member should keep up their own discipline. Please have a look at below suggested list:
1. Hanging alert would be a positive approach.
2. keeping a cleaning boy to wipe down all equipment at day end
Hope you may appriciate this procedure towards keeping the excercise time and materials in more better way. Thank you in advance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Koto, Hope you are doing well. let me...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
... Hope you are doing well. let me introduce myself first. I, Sharmisth...
^^^
Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lets
...ch may affect your heath badly. lets come to the issues we have to tolerate ...
^^^^
Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...ch may affect your heath badly. lets come to the issues we have to tolerate ...
^^^^
Line 19, column 72, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... to tolerate from last couple of weeks. it is found that member of this gym is not...
^^
Line 19, column 166, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: Throughout
...taining machines at the end of the day. Through out entire day, more than 100 folks are acc...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 268, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'problems'' or 'problem's'?
Suggestion: problems'; problem's
...equipment, keeping in mind various skin problems gym should take care of it. Apart from ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 614, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... are not able to access those machines. this may result to lose people from your gym...
^^^^
Line 27, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...below suggested list: 1. Hanging alert would be a positive approach. 2. keepi...
^^
Line 29, column 4, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Keeping
...ert would be a positive approach. 2. keeping a cleaning boy to wipe down all equipme...
^^^^^^^
Line 35, column 92, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...ing the excercise time and materials in more better way. Thank you in advance.
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, so, then, well, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 249.0 206.0 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78714859438 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24284874164 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 127.690721649 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670682730924 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2725489864 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5625 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163219148615 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507091674391 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437216268588 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776589950956 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498899758216 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.