Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Global warming is the highest threat to the entire world. It is an ongoing debate to own the responsibility for climate change. In my opinion, be it developed or developing countries, everybody should stand together to save our planet.
Firstly, modernization in the developed countries has led to the destruction of more trees to establish high-rise buildings, many roads for many vehicles that emit more carbon-di-oxides. It is thus the reduction of trees that makes the climate change by the reduction in the rain makes the sun rays seep into the ground. For example, New York city is count to be one of the modern cities with many skyscrapers that have faced a bad drought during 2015 in its weather history. Therefore, realistically, the United States of America have introduced a rule to limit the city limit to avoid the destruction of trees and plant more in the country-side.
Secondly, developing countries are being used to set up a manufacturing plant of the company from the developed country to offer more employment to the people of that country. For Instance, a manufacture division of Belkin, a popular Telecommunication brand of America, has established a plant in Nepal in 2008. Indeed, it is giving more job opportunities to the people. However, the heavy smoke generated by that manufacturing company causes a serious climate alert as the snowy mountains in the neighboring area has started melting down. As a result of it, more climate impact can be expected
Finally, NASA and in the participation of other major countries such as Russia, China, and others conducted a program in the detection of the high polluting and less forest country. The report states that the developing country being a victim to favor the developed country as mentioned in the above example.
In my opinion, the responsibility to save the planet relies on everyone's hands to save the earth else we will be responsible for our own death.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05572755418 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04653716273 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547987616099 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.290026195 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.642857143 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236079825501 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750379914426 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647163002316 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128318366596 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414810699102 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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