Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
Dear Mr. Singh,
I am Manas Ranjan Sahu, a student at your college from the Physics department, writing this letter for the newly introduced computer course, as I have a keen interest to learn computer programing.
According to the notice, one ought to have completed an introductory course prior to this new course; however, I did not have any previous certification on a computer, and this is the primary hindrance to enrol the new computer programing course and the significant reason to write a letter to you as well.
Even though my background is in Physics, I have a computer in my home, and I have basic knowledge of how to operate. On the contrary, to have command on programming individuals always need a mentor or counsellor, and when I found such an opportunity in our college premises, I could not cease myself.
Everyone commence their initial journey from a point, and I want that to be my college for my computer programming journey. Previously there had been some cases where special care had taken off for several courses. On this occasion, I request you to consider my case to allow me to enrol for the course.
Taking my ongoing lure and circumference hope you will allow me to enrol for the new computer course. I will wait for your reply, enthusiastically.
Yours faithfully,
Manas Ranjan Sahu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, thus, well, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93832599119 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90421655382 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590308370044 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.5330503673 44.8134815571 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.1 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299358716478 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103249863793 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756605663248 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1639740139 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533258133375 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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