A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper.
Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:
explain what you are currently doing
describe your suitability for this area of work
say when you can attend an interview
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regard to the recent advertisement which I read on in The Time India on October 2nd, 2019.
Currently, I am working as a waiter in Shine restaurant, where I started my career, with 2 years of experience in total. On top of that, I possessed a bachelor's degree along with a hotel management qualification. However, now looking for a new opportunity that will accommodate my education.
According to the advert, you need a highly educated guy for your 5-star restaurant who must have a degree and a year of experience. In my opinion, I am the perfect fit. Moreover, your restaurant is adjacent to my locality and I can assimilate to the work culture as I have been trained for it.
I have a keen interest to attend the interview on 10th November, which mentioned in the newspaper, to prove my credibility.
I look forward to hearing from you at earliest.
Yours sincerely,
Manas Sahu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, in my opinion, with regard to, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86503067485 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00732416694 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656441717791 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3222583278 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240801415685 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805938836681 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715587097876 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914749731208 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775977453156 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.