Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Recently, the knowledge of humanity has inclined remarkably than before. There are people who think that life today is easier and more comfortable today than it was before when our grandparents were children. Considering several breakthroughs in the technologic advancements, in spite of earlier discoveries, in my humble opinion, I agree with life will become easier and more comfortable while the time passes.
Firstly, transportaion advanced in the last decades. Distance between countries became shorter and shorter thanks to train and planes. There are many international railways constucted by neigboring countries to ease the transportation among the countries. Although it wasn't too ancient when our grandparents were children, the speed of the trains were much lower.
In fact, the time management of individuals which depends on weeks, or maybe months, become depending on days, or even hours. Moreover, old transportation wasn't comfortable probably, unlike today's where large and relaxed sits are provided in the first class part of the planes. Introducing the hosteses and other sevices to costumers increase the level of comforting much higher. Additional competition in between different companies which provides the same type of transportation, gradually, brings numerous innovations that promisses easier and more comfortable travel.
Secondly, information can be obtained easier thanks to the internet and online resources. Most of the students are responsible for doing abundant research thoughout their education. Although, in the earlier times, libraries allowed students to find the proper information, it needed effort and time. On the other hand, the Internet libraries, today, provide much information on various subjects. Thus, thanks to internet, many students reduced their study time and can spend their time on themselves to have fun.
Thirdly, communication become available wireless and through radio waves. It isn't because the discovery of phone, but the improvements on the technology of phone ease the communication between people far distant from eachother.
For example, a group of friends, who are doing Erasmus in different countries, can have skype meeting, if they miss eachother without visiting them or waiting for days for a letter from them. Therefore, people do not need to travel all the way to the other countries to just say "Hi!".
In conclusion, even though our grandparents wasn't aware these advencements at those days, we can compare today with past and say that it became easier and more comfortable. The new transportation types shortened the required time to travel, and the competition makes it serve more comfortable sits. Moreover, suffering with tradional search centers, libraries, solved thanks to the internet, and now students can do their researchs easily, also they have free time to have fun. Lastly, arisen communication features of phones help us to communicate easily with others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2541.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65924276169 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0238263961 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583518930958 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 763.2 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7859418863 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.875 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7083333333 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193452328437 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501434936194 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777633992901 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091545642876 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985747216645 0.0645574589148 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 10.9000537634 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 86.8835125448 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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