You stayed at a hotel recently and forgot your clothes there. Write a letter to the hotel manager and say
– When and where did you stay?
– Describe your clothes.
– What would you like the manager to do about it?
Dear Sir,
This is to inform you that I am Prabhjot an events manager in Tata Consultancy Services. I had one day visit at Gurgon last Sunday on 1st September, owing to the client meeting and I stayed at room number A001 in your renowned hotel. I am writing this to request favour to find the clothes that I mistakenly forgot in that very room.
On the next day of my checkout, I was in a hurry to board my flight back to Punjab because of which I left my jacket and scarf in the room. For your information, the forgotten attires include a black denim Tommy Hilfiger's jacket of medium size and multi-coloured VeroModa scarf. I clearly remember that I had put them on the chair as there was no space left in my bag. However, while leaving I completely forgot to take them.
Therefore, I urge you to ask your cleaning staff to look for my belongings. These clothes are very valuable as they were gifted to me by my father. So I request you to courier them to my address which I have mentioned on the entry register. I am also willing to pay the expenses.
Thank you in advance for your help, and I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Yours sincerely,
Prabh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'events'' or 'event's'?
Suggestion: events'; event's
... is to inform you that I am Prabhjot an events manager in Tata Consultancy Services. I...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4479638009 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48892635631 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606334841629 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8298080923 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6153846154 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225204395754 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720400831031 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603895334201 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139397185291 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757104118065 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.