The maps below illustrate how Frenton changed from 1990 and 2012

Essay topics:

The maps below illustrate how Frenton changed from 1990 and 2012.

The image shows the changes of Frenton over a 22-year period. Overall, there some buildings have change their functions and expand their buildings.

To begin, there are two buildings upgrade their function such as theater and shops. Theater is becoming cinema while shops are becoming supermarket in the southeast of the town. In addItional of this, there is a place in the southwest of the town where trees put down then build a technopark. There also some buildings change into new one. Bank was renovated into restaurant in the south of the town. Cafe and park next to high street was rebuilt to became a hotel and golf course.

There are some buildings expand and construct new buildings. A hospital next to high street has been upgrade their size. In the residential area, houses are changed into block of apartments and there some expansion to build a new apartment in the north of the town.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, then, while, in addition, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 753.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85806451613 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44493147273 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3208666053 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4545454545 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0909090909 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0625153740644 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0271248857989 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419347218956 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568809973312 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457729878773 0.0819641961636 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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