The maps below illustrate how Frenton changed from 1990 and 2012.
The image shows the changes of Frenton Town over a 22-year period. Overall, the green areas has been destructed to build new facilities, and some buildings convert into new buildings.
To begin, the trees are cutting down to constructing new buildings. The residential areas have changed a lot by renovate houses and build new apartments in playing fields in north of the town. There is a place in the southwest of the town where trees put down then build a technopark. In addition of this, café and park on the right side of high street was renovated to built a hotel and golf course.
There some facilities growth of qualities in commercial zone such as theater and shops in the southeast of the town are transferring into cinema and supermarket respectively. There also bank was expanded and renovated into a restaurant in the south of the town. A hospital next to high street has been upgrade their size while educational facilities such as school and library still the same.
- The diagram shows production of sugar by a German company for supermarkets and restaurants 61
- Many museums charge for admission ehile others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweighvthe advantages? 56
- The maps below illustrate how Frenton changed from 1990 and 2012. 11
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The map illustrates the changes that have occured in Templeton a sidesea resort over a 10 a year period beginning in 1990 and ending in 2005 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...es put down then build a technopark. In addition of this, café and park on the right sid...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'facilities'' or 'facility's'?
Suggestion: facilities'; facility's
...hotel and golf course. There some facilities growth of qualities in commercial zone ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, still, then, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86390532544 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69971670581 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585798816568 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3892224111 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0392845387571 0.215688989381 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0192882622355 0.103423049105 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406204555339 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.031074278935 0.15604864568 20% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291823945658 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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