Celebrities play a crucial role in our society. They are highly valued and their opinions are important to people of the community. A debatable questions sometimes arise that whether same value is given to their opinions by different age groups of people. From my perspective, I hold the view that younger people tend to put more importance on opinions of celebrities. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs present several compelling reasons with evidences.
The first thing that comes to my mind regarding value of opinions of famous people to different generations is that tendency of showing importance to others' comment changes over time. Usually, views on disparate matters have been deeply rooted by that time people becomes older. Thus, it is tough to change those views by saying some words. To shed light on this view, consider a person who believes on some religious view for his whole life. It is very unlikely that a comment from a famous person would change his view, thought that comment might be logical and irrefutable.
Secondly, with the advancement of technology and online services, nowadays people are aware and it becomes easy to spread a opinion via social media. Young people are more engaged in social media and when they group together, they like to discuss on comments or activities of beloved celebrities. Thus some people might get motivated by their heroes' speech or writings. For example, recently in Turkey, a famous superstar posts comment against ruling government and next day thousands of young people gathered at a public place to support his view.
In addition, young people are dreamy and most of them wish to have a life like their superstars. Teenagers are amazed by their beloved celebrities' talk and tend to follow their every movement and sometimes try to imitate them. As a result, opinion of celebrities becomes opinions of general public. By contrast, older people are not generally blind follower of celebrities and they do not constantly give importance to some person. They generally prioritize their own work and make secured future for their kids.
To wrap up, as human mind evolved continuously, opinion of celebrities have lesser effect on older people than younger ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13858695652 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65583401891 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0447985152 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.55 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228462573265 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720938208415 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587241208968 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134315021407 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457154149133 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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