You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter;
1) Explain what you like about the cafeteria.
2)Say what is wrong with it.
3) Suggest how it could be improved.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in connection to our college canteen which i believe can be made better in some aspects.
I enjoy all the dishes which are served there and they are very delicious. The best part of this cafeteria is that they post nutritional facts about every dish they serve on college`s website which is very informative in its own way.
Although there are so many things to appreciate about this facility but the seating arrangement is not adequate to cater for a larger number of students coming to eat there. The place gets too crowded more often and most of the times we have to wait for the tables to be vacant which consumes more time and we are left with a very short window to eat before next class begins.
I suggest that may be we can use the open space adjacent to the canteen and set up more tables and chairs to add more space to this eating facility. But a sunshade needs to be installed in this area to protect the students from scorching heat during day time while they eat.
I hope we will get to see improvements in this area in the near future.
Yours faithfully,
Sumair Aslam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...connection to our college canteen which i believe can be made better in some aspe...
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Line 13, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r the tables to be vacant which consumes more time and we are left with a very sh...
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Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
... next class begins. I suggest that may be we can use the open space adjacent to t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58737864078 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38864549433 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626213592233 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.1900610187 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120023607271 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482733385914 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344724827091 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554631806167 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290493613153 0.0580467560999 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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