The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches.
The process of making match sticks involves a well defined series of steps to be performed. The manufacturing process involves machinery like peeler, chopper, tanks, drier, storage area, conveyer belts, and a packaging area. At a higher level, the cycle involves processing of raw wood, attaching chemical tip for ignition, and finally packing the matches.
Firstly, wood logs are peeled using a peeler and the peeled logs are passed through a Chopper. The Chopper cuts the wooden logs into desired shape and size. The chopped logs are then treated with Ammonium Phosphate solution in a tank; which are then sent for drying. The dried logs are then accumulated in a storage using a metal duct after passing through a blower.
Now the logs, of desired shape and size, are moved from storage area onto perforated steel belt; this belt, through its movement carries the logs along with it for chemical treatment. During chemical treatment, paraffin wax and other chemicals are used to make the matches. The tip of the match sticks are finally treated with appropriate chemicals, and the belt moves further to transport the match sticks to the packaging area - here, the manufactured matches are packed, and thus completing the manufacturing process of matches.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The process of making match sticks invol...
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...a tank; which are then sent for drying. The dried logs are then accumulated in a st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, so, then, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20487804878 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54098277412 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580487804878 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1409272178 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.7 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130975380186 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576933621956 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524043435998 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901184702045 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037915640913 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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