WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches.
The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make where relevancto.mparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
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The diagram above indicates the stages and equipments used to make the matches. The matches first cut, prepared, dryed and put into several chemical before bring to the packing area.
In the first phase, the wood log has been used to peeled by the blade to form into a flat piece of wood called veneer. In this step, the veneer will be moved to the chopper to cut into a small piece of stricks.
In the next stage, this small sticks will be dip to a Ammonium Phosphate which is a flamable chemicals tank.
In the following phase, sticks will put into a hopper mare by metal duct. From the inside will have a blower to transport the stricks to the storage area.
In the final stage, the stricks will falled into shaped tunel which line them up to be inserted to a perforated steel belt. The chain will moved the strick to dip into several tank which are Paraffin wax. Based chemicals, tip chemicals tank. After that, the chain continuing to moved to dryed area and then moved to packing area process.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o cut into a small piece of stricks. In the next stage, this small sticks will ...
^^
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...stage, this small sticks will be dip to a Ammonium Phosphate which is a flamable ...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... which is a flamable chemicals tank. In the following phase, sticks will put in...
^^
Line 9, column 140, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'move'
Suggestion: move
...a perforated steel belt. The chain will moved the strick to dip into several tank whi...
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Line 9, column 169, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun tank seems to be countable; consider using: 'several tanks'.
Suggestion: several tanks
...chain will moved the strick to dip into several tank which are Paraffin wax. Based chemicals...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53005464481 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12086633111 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.1413193478 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.3636363636 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108174154162 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546097297263 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116197196773 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702045025397 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773737951057 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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