You have some repairs to do at home, but there is a restaurant next to your house. Write a letter to the restaurant manager and say:
- What repairs are you going to do?
- How will it affect the restaurant?
- Provide a solution for the inconvenience.
Dear sir/ madam
I am your neiborhood and i write this letter hope you will sympathy with the trouble i am going to make today which may affect your restaurant.
Yesterday, the wall of my house broke into pieces. I called the engineer to reconstruct it but there was no response since the Sunday and they did not work. Therefore, i have to fix it by myshelf today. While i build up, it may make some noise due to the machine. I am affraid that your customer may fell unpleasant with the noise, it will affect there meal. but do not worry, the process will last at most till the afternoon. I will give some small gifts to your guest as the apology. Thank you for your sympathy.
I am looking forward to hearing from you
Your sincerely
Alice
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir/ madam I am your neiborhood and i write this le...
^^^^
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... sir/ madam I am your neiborhood and i write this letter hope you will sympath...
^
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hope you will sympathy with the trouble i am going to make today which may affect...
^
Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... have to fix it by myshelf today. While i build up, it may make some noise due to...
^
Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...h the noise, it will affect there meal. but do not worry, the process will last at ...
^^^
Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I am looking forward to hearing from you Your sincerely Alice
^^^^
Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd to hearing from you Your sincerely Alice
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 613.0 937.175257732 65% => OK
No of words: 139.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41007194245 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2874530345 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 127.690721649 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661870503597 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 186.3 290.88556701 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3130830418 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.3 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213339085771 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773053482278 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585615884671 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13590413936 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047258752316 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.