The extended family is less important now than it was in the past.
An increasing concern for many people around the world is the extended family members or relatives such as grandparents, cousin, aunts, and uncles, etc. is less significant or prominent now than it was in the past. It is often said that relatives are less important however others feel that kin are extremely significant. In this essay, I will examine both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion.
From an overall perspective, there is a wide range of reasons why believe that relatives are very crucial in our life. Firstly, without the family members in my view, it is not called a family, because nowadays, the present scenario must have family relatives, seeing that for caring, showing love, affection, and dearness, etc. or else if we don't have family members we feel very lonely or segregated from society. Secondly, when we are in trouble or any problems, we need help so, relatives play a major role in supporting our family. Thirdly, especially for kids or children when they seek any guidance or advise some children can't share openly with their parents, As a result, in addition to relatives will be acting as a mutual to both their children and parents, etc.
Despite these arguments, there are also reasons to disagree with the idea that some relatives can't bear or see when you are getting popular or fame in some cases only. In rare families, relatives can misleader misguided by relatives. So, that is the reason they feel relatives are less important in day to day life.
In conclusion, it must be said that the relatives are less significant now than earlier days, has become a complex issue with no easy solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91134751773 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5878168281 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1390948052 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.538461538 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215228055025 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849705906522 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132346640984 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145458908051 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116534835332 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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