the graph illustrates the spending patterns of three continents (Asia, Europe, and the United States) on various channels of entertainment such as (cinema, video, music, television, and publishing) over the course of five years from 1995 to 2000.
Overall, The united states have spent the most money on entertainment, more than 60% of the share was spent on publishing and television combined for all the continents, and a minimum was spent on cinema, video, and music for the duration of 5 years
O cinema, people spent the least amount of money
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 459.0 965.302439024 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 91.0 196.424390244 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04395604396 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.08859061939 3.73543355544 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75326813961 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 57.0 106.607317073 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626373626374 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 135.9 283.868780488 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 22.4926829268 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.5 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 229.5 112.824112599 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.5 22.9334400587 198% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248100941194 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177418127127 0.103423049105 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0237548748507 0.0843802449381 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1536131264 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230424797199 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.1 13.2329268293 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 61.2550243902 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.3012195122 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.84 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 25.0 11.4329268293 219% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.9970731707 182% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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