A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before. Say where you went, where you stayed, what you can do there and what the food was like.
Dear Kelly,
Hope things are fine at your end! I am glad to hear that you finally decided to have a short break from work and take your family on a vacation. I would certainly share my favorite vacation spot which I took last year.
To begin with, it is a great idea to travel to an unknown land and bag up some new adventurous experience. Thus, we chalked out a plan to visited Bintan-Island last year. Though being a small island in Indonesia, you could find frequent ferries from Singapore with less than an hour ride and tickets are easily available throughout a year, along with hassle-free visa on arrival.
Furthermore, this destination is a weekend gateway for Singaporeans who want to relax and enjoy white sandy beach with clean blue water. Still, you would be surprised to find easy availability of rooms. We stayed at Bintan-Lagoon resort which had direct access to the beach as well as it had private swimming pools and water activities such as snorkeling, jet skies, underwater walk and many more. Children can also enjoy water slides and jungle gym with few elephant trail walks around.
Finally, all the resorts on that island offer an inclusive package of buffet breakfast and dinner for your stay. It serves you multi cuisine meal but I could still have a taste of their mouth-watering sea food which is must try.
Do convey my love and regards to your family.
With warm wishes,
Neha.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 108, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...bag up some new adventurous experience. Thus we chalked out a plan to visited Bintan...
^^^^
Line 13, column 138, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...hite sandy beach with clean blue water. Still you would be surprised to find easy ava...
^^^^^
Line 17, column 220, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... their mouth-watering sea food which is must to try. Do convey my love and regard...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, so, still, thus, well, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82995951417 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54860148624 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 127.690721649 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708502024291 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5457554713 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7692307692 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149301478021 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489287650308 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509512466806 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884529926994 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326324901851 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.