You need to borrow some money to pay for something you need for your work or studies. Write a letter to your bank to ask for a loan. In your letter
introduce yourself and ask for a loan
say why you need the money
explain how you plan to pay the money back
Dear Sir or Madam,
my name is John employed in Trade Communication possesses Software Engineer position for three consecutive years. Additionally, holding a deposit account in your bank. however, the objective of this letter is to apply for a loan for registering in a certification course newly introduced for Project management Professionals. this course further trains with management tactics for multinational companies. For example, many multinational companies required to manage or organise their events, offices, franchise or products based on different countries. this certification also ensures career growth and open doors for new opportunities.
Furthermore, ensuring you about the refund of the total amount within te months period, you may deduct 10,000 Rs. each month when my salary deposited into my account. however, hoping to have an approval grant on the application for the loan.
I look forward to hearing from you soon concerning my application to further education.
Yours Sincerely,
Moses
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-24 | astrlw@hotmail.com | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, my name is John employed in Trade Commun...
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Suggestion: However
...holding a deposit account in your bank. however, the objective of this letter is to app...
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Suggestion: This
...d for Project management Professionals. this course further trains with management t...
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Suggestion: This
... products based on different countries. this certification also ensures career growt...
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...en my salary deposited into my account. however, hoping to have an approval grant on th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80263157895 4.54256449028 128% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17972171643 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.75 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3833669972 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258663085116 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958382419175 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394802141115 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138054242069 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536242813023 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 70.7449484536 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 8.71597938144 181% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 7.59969072165 131% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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