Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion
While some opine that reading printed papers is the top choice to get the latest news, I am inclined to the view that updating alterations around the world through other media would be preference.
Advocates of newspapers claim that there are ostensibly an enormous number of merits it brings about. The most conspicuous one is that papers are considered as the most scrupulous source of the information, the information being thoroughly verified before publishing. Additionally, newspaper articles are presented with academic style and elaborate words. Such fact would encourage people to not only learn news but also ameliorate knowledge relating to languages. Beside that, learning news through printed papers denotes that people could restrict approach with electronic screen, this trend diminishing eye diseases such as short-sightedness, farsightedness and astigmatism.
Notwithstanding the aforementioned reasons, my perspective is strongly that human might update news the more favorable via other media. The most salient element causing my opinion is that thanks to smartphone and laptop connected the internet, people could accumulate a great amount of the information from manifold abundant and diverse resources, website, forum, social media, for example. Apart from that, keeping track of incidents from all corners of the world via the internet would help residents to have multidimensional views about issues, thereby improving dwellers ’s comparative and analytical competence. In addition, human might find out the information which relates to followed issues by them without difficulty. Furthermore, the fact that people collect news via the internet is the fastest, the most convenient and frugal way in order to keep abreast of alterations around the world. The last advantage is that getting news through other media would take place at any time and everywhere.
The foregoing discussion, I would reiterate that in this day and age, people have inclination for reading news via the internet, particularly social media like Facebook or Twitter or numerous online papers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, well, while, apart from, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68253968254 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99956493024 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638095238095 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9201689109 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.692307692 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2435926876 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813468844793 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06147858548 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140678820819 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363288032261 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.