People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection.
In your letter
describe the problems
explain how they are affecting people
say what the company should do to help
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing you to express my discontent with Internet connection that your company provides in our area. I must confess that this interruption cause me not to finish my assignments in time. This situation is compounded by the fact that I forced to pay penalties owing to this delay.
Your company has well-known reputation due to its customer care and you precisely guaranty Internet packages features such as speed, traffic and volume as has been shown in your websites. Being disconnected has huge impact on me and our neighbors. In the other hand, whenever is connected, slow speed of the Internet that is as few as kb, makes our daily compulsory works much harder. It is impossible to do to shopping or even pay bills by e-bank.
As you are forerunner enterprise, I expect you to ask your staff come and fix this problem. You can do drive test if you want scrutinized the difficulty. Hence, your company is accountable for mitigating the speed and connection problems, please take any prompt solution to fix it.
I eagerly wait for your feedback.
Yours faithfully,
Shima Momtazi
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| 2019-11-11 | yaldaasgari | 87 | view |
| 2019-09-24 | Shimaa | 87 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I eagerly wait for your feedback. Yours faithfully, Shima Momtazi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98404255319 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81259776753 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659574468085 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.08223061 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0833333333 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197447620952 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673513103356 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669318954799 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110907145818 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197578353683 0.0580467560999 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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