People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection.
In your letter
describe the problems
explain how they are affecting people
say what the company should do to help
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the Internet service which you provide for our region, the omid complex. I would like to draw to your attention to some major problems with Internet accessibility through the last days.
It is about three days that we are not able to connect to the Internet. To be exact, we do not have constant access to the Internet and most of the time the Internet was clogged. The last time that connected to the Internet was Saturday morning and since then, not only me but also some of the neighbors who use your company services, having struggle with the Internet connection.
This problem caused much negative consequence, as the Internet plays a vital role in our daily life. To illustrate this, I have some important ongoing projects that need a great deal of research and negotiation with other colleagues from other branches. I used to do these tasks via the Internet by exploring related websites and e-mail, respectively. Besides, I know one of my neighbors use the Internet for selling his products and these days have many compliant from his customer because he was not able to offer online services.
I would like to ask you to solve this problem as soon as possible. I think the best way to rectify the situation is to send your operator to examine all connections.
I hope this matter will receive your immediate attention.
Yours sincerely,
Yalda Asgari.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfacti...
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Line 7, column 283, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ng and since then, not only me but also some of the neighbors who use your company services...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rator to examine all connections. I hope this matter will receive your imme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9028340081 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66892835187 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0125250842 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1538461538 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237792453694 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783007535812 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497684808023 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116647526866 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585866882874 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.