The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.

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The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.

The bar chart illustrates how much leisure time per week was enjoyed by males and females of five categories of employment status in 1998-1999.

Overall, men enjoyed more hours of free time per week than women in three of the categories. However, in two categories only figures for women are shown– employed part-time and housewives.

Among the full-time employed, men had slightly more leisure time than women, with almost 50 hours per week, compared with 40 hours for women. unemployed and retired people of both genders enjoyed the most hours of leisure. Among men, the unemployed had about 85hours of free time per week, the same figure as retired men. unemployed and retired women had slightly less leisure time, and the figure for both of these female categories was around75 hours.

Housewives enjoyed 50 hours of free time, a little more than women who were employed part-time, who had just over 40 leisure hours each week. There are no figures shown for men in either of these categories.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Unemployed
...week, compared with 40 hours for women. unemployed and retired people of both genders enjo...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Unemployed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02380952381 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42295539961 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529761904762 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9156578038 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7777777778 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 5.23603664747 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310049549438 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146156198571 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629899648543 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223699711085 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214197169235 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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