It is becoming increasingly expensive to keep museum open to the public. What do you think is the best way of finding them, example the government, business or individual.
It is undeniable fact whether in order to retain museums open to the public have become much expensive. These a variety of communities need to consider on such obstacles. This eassy intends to know what are the reasons behind the causes of this phenomenon and what should be done to crub this menace and my personal opinion this matter.
To embark with, the evidences are plenty to prove how museums could be maintained by different kinds of funding. The mammoth recognisable fact is that museum is an essential part of nation, which indicates native culture and other ancient times of nation. Such heritage sites major contribution in country's economic as overseas tourism visit on these places, and lots of money is spent by tourists on them. Native people also visit to see the beauty of heritage places as well as explore to attain much knowledge from there. If such sites are much expensive to visit, no one could be interested to come there due to high price tickets.
However, there are some remedies which could mitigate such obstacles. Maintaining of these is much imperative to us. It could be done by some communities ranging from government and business. Firstly, government plays a vital role to preserve them. Government should investment on histrionic and heritage places. It should be made affordable so that it could be affordable as per a middle class person. Business community should contribution on heritage places. Companies have to be organised their events on these sites. To illustrate, according to recent survey which has been carried out in USA, many companies over there devote fund for the museums as they found that it will prove helpful them to promote their products.
To sum up, albeit museums have become expensive due to some reasons, it could be maintained and made inexpensive with the help of communities which have enough fund to sort out such issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 308, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ould be done to crub this menace and my personal opinion this matter. To embark with, the e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, as to, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01577287066 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61183117227 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558359621451 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0584414699 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0985417739854 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0295581280373 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377106109416 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665197597591 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243383122362 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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