Recently you have attended a job interview which went well, but you are still waiting for the result. Write a letter to HR manager of the company.
In your letter, you should:
give details of the job
tell why you think the interview went well
explain why you need to know the result.
Dear Sir,
I hope your day is going very well. I am writing this letter to inquire about the successful interview I had with you last week.
I appeared to give an interview for Manufacturing Technologist position. The job consists of assisting design engineers to create detailed shop drawings also to program and setup CNC machines along with training new and old workers.
I was asked to program one of the machines which did quite well. And there were number of questions related to lean manufacturing were asked by you and I answered them all and I remember you endorsing all of them.
At the present time I am in dire need of a job to build my finances. Addition to this, I am being asked to join a company from another interview that I had two weeks ago. However, I find your company interested more than other ones. Therefore, it would be great if you could tell me your verdict on the interview.
Your attention to the matter in an urgency will be highly appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
Rahul Tiwari
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I hope your day is going very well. I am...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...terview I had with you last week. I appeared to give an interview for Manuf...
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Line 25, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hly appreciated. Yours faithfully, Rahul Tiwari
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68141753556 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677777777778 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3612311249 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264641867518 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081156669459 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597206400151 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124927554119 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668714553871 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.