Some people believe that entertainers are more important than scientists. Do you agree or disagree? Support with reasons and examples from your own experience.
Needless to say, science-oriented people and public performers plays an imperative role in this world and influence people’s lives in a positive way to a great extent. Some people regard artists as principal people in today's society whilst other advocate scientist are key individuals who makes the world a better place to live. In my opinion, contemporary world demands more researchers than the social executants.
First of all, the technology that surround us is a gift from most intriguing people of human history. To substantiate this viewpoint, the constructive contribute of scientists has enabled human to build advanced transportation methods and invented internet to allow people to connect globally. Such growth helps brilliant minds to come together and refine interrelationship and grow nation’s economy.
Secondly, science driven people have invented some of the complex medical equipment and machines that helps save people’s lives in an emergency. For instance, highly precise MRI machine has been incredibly successful to detect the early symptoms of catastrophic diseases like cancer and allow doctors to save precious lives.
However, human brain is highly susceptible to stress and can easily run out of power. Creative people like comedians and singers help to ease the mind strain. For instance, listening to a soulful performance of a singer and laughing on funny jokes gives a break to the brain and helps in a recovery to be energized to carry out everyday tasks.
To core out, scientific community push boundaries of human limits and invent the future. Nevertheless, there are some occasions where scientist cannot take the place of an entertainer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...world and influence people's lives in a positive way to a great extent. Some people regard a...
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Line 9, column 47, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ly, science driven people have invented some of the complex medical equipment and machines ...
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Line 9, column 331, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d allow doctors to save precious lives. However, human brain is highly susceptib...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52671755725 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07935562963 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652671755725 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.568288333 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.384615385 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101530095251 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356299306794 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324437482051 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0509036970408 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312328822891 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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