Today, the world is suffering from hiking the level of crime as we see the headlines. Similarly, committing crime frequently has been common despite delivering the sentence to the offender. I will examine some reasons of being crime again and some plausible solutions.
To begin, there are number of reasons which support to it in finding reasons. First and foremost, as lawbreakers have some involvement in criminal activities, they get to experience the punishment based on the nature of crime. So, having the bad company in the jail, they rather get more powerful once being out of the jail because of more connection with criminals. As a result, once and for all they throw themselves in the activity of crime. Suppressing by someone legally, making trial and conspiracy against any lawbreaker may compel of being committed crime again in order to take revenge upon it.
As far as the causes of being commited the crime at the higher extent are concerned, the ways are also taken into consideration to solve this issue at some level. Counselling program is one of the best way to aware them with better guidance of life. Moreover, believing them to the value of society, family and contribution towards their own country by providing social teachings and motivational speeches. Which may prove to be beneficial in terms of stop criminal activities.
In conclusion, considering the hiking crime level, so it is important to have better solution on this worst problem of the society by providing counselling program and realising them about their worth contribution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...them to the value of society, family and contribution towards their own country b...
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Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...al teachings and motivational speeches. Which may prove to be beneficial in terms of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11627906977 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80554834147 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62015503876 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0168069031 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.538461538 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183475603541 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555581546365 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437213679296 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104093465249 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00528434029535 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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