Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely
administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However,
since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the
inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely
administered.
Being assured before is better than facing the consequences later where we would not repent later and feel poignant by the results we get and assuaging oneself would not lead to re-birth of lives.The argument worries about the administration process towards cow flu.In my opinion I mostly disagree with the proposed argument, for my two reasons stated below which emphasizes and elated the pros and cons.
to begin,when the disease is detected in the respective demography the administration should definitely look into this aspect of prospect.For instance if they have moniteered for one time and they get result that only few of them are contaminated with it and that disease is not that malignant to people,If they leave like that itself that disease might get worsen and can lead to wide variety of other unknown diseases which is never a boon but an utter negligence.Perhaps, administration should definitely happen and their respective preventive measures to be taken care of consequently to belittle the threat of a innocuous disease which might transform into humongous disease. Therefore, being preventive is definitely going to be a boon.
Furthermore,administration can be done in an efficient way by taking the best fit time to reiterate the administration till the cow flu succumbs then there would be no more upbringing of that flu anymore at least for that period of time.As these diseases are whimsical they are sporadic and clandestine in nature they can behave in haphazard manner. Moniteering in smart way is import rather than mundane administration of flu.
Therefore,monitering the flu in a controlled and time efficient manner by detecting the extent of the prevalence of the flu the administration should reiterate its process till the flu disappears.Definitely reiterating the essence of prevention rather than repenting is a boon and beneficial to society.
- All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently.If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees,such consultancies would be unnecessary. 50
- Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinelyadministered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However,since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of theinoculations, we cannot permit 63
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 309 350
No. of Characters: 1562 1500
No. of Different Words: 170 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.193 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.055 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.957 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 84 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 44.143 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 26.702 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.857 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.433 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.746 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.148 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...elf would not lead to re-birth of lives.The argument worries about the administrati...
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Suggestion: In
... administration process towards cow flu.In my opinion I mostly disagree with the p...
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...izes and elated the pros and cons. to begin,when the disease is detected in t...
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Suggestion: , when
... elated the pros and cons. to begin,when the disease is detected in the respecti...
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...itely look into this aspect of prospect.For instance if they have moniteered for on...
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... disease is not that malignant to people,If they leave like that itself that diseas...
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Suggestion: Perhaps
...is never a boon but an utter negligence.Perhaps, administration should definitely happe...
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Line 5, column 568, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...spective preventive measures to be taken care of consequently to belittle the thr...
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... consequently to belittle the threat of a innocuous disease which might transform...
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Suggestion: , administration
...ely going to be a boon. Furthermore,administration can be done in an efficient way by taki...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient way" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... Furthermore,administration can be done in an efficient way by taking the best fit time to reiterat...
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Suggestion: As
...nymore at least for that period of time.As these diseases are whimsical they are s...
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...r than mundane administration of flu. Therefore,monitering the flu in a contro...
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...ane administration of flu. Therefore,monitering the flu in a controlled and time effici...
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Suggestion: Definitely
...ate its process till the flu disappears.Definitely reiterating the essence of prevention r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, so, then, therefore, at least, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 55.5748502994 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 2260.96107784 71% => OK
No of words: 299.0 441.139720559 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33779264214 5.12650576532 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49067760575 2.78398813304 125% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 204.123752495 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561872909699 0.468620217663 120% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 705.55239521 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 22.8473053892 214% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 209.880720093 57.8364921388 363% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 266.0 119.503703932 223% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.8333333333 23.324526521 214% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.6666666667 5.70786347227 292% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.25449101796 305% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132792876344 0.218282227539 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686827095861 0.0743258471296 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0208682136939 0.0701772020484 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801094764643 0.128457276422 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018045053101 0.0628817314937 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.6 14.3799401198 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 13.28 48.3550499002 27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 12.197005988 193% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.58 12.5979740519 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.32208582834 124% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 98.500998004 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 12.3882235529 234% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 11.1389221557 194% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 11.9071856287 244% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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