Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
In today's modern world, a part of the population believes that having an enjoyable job has greater significance that earning a big salary, while others that higher wages can lead to better living conditions. This essay will discuss both views and will also state why I strongly believe that money does not bring happiness and a pleasureful working environment is essential for everyone.
To begin, there is no deny that humans seek enjoyment and happiness in every aspect of their lives. That is why an occupation which brings these feeling to them is considered as more desirable than money. In addition, the sense of fulfillment can not be reached when the prior target of someone is higher profits. Individual studies in the USA have shown that 80% of employees that openly admitted that the first reason that they accept their positions was a big salary, in less than 6 months suffered from depression.
On the other hand, the ways in which a big salary can lead us to a better life are numerous. First of all, it can give us the potential of being healthy, since the prices of vegetables and superfoods will not be extremely high. Secondly, it can provide a sense of security, physical or psychological. A few studies have revealed that young people decide to make or not families due to the lack or not of money.
To conclude, I am of the opinion that regardless of the major benefits that a work with a big salary has, people, should prioritize their choice of a job considering the joy or not it can give to them. Of course, money makes our life easier but not happier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... makes our life easier but not happier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, of course, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72043010753 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5929812679 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4459668001 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.75 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226123441081 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715258359069 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520467066045 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125974291803 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332397755173 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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