Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life.
People has been participating in money-based jobs either for fulfilling their needs or supporting their families as the world is more materialistic nowadays. Does earning a lot of money only makes people happy? Some people believes that enjoyable job is more important than money, while others opine that good salary leads to quality living. Although both the views have merits which will be discussed in the essay, I will support the self-satisfaction over huge salary paid jobs.
To begin with, earning large amounts fulfills all the physical and social needs as high income people can not only purchase luxurious homes and automobiles but also will have high social status in the society. A businessman, for instance, can earn high amount than he will be fulfilling the desires of his families by shopping clothes and taking them out for travelling famous place like Paris. Moreover, everyone in the society will respects and believes on the businessman that will give him high status in the hierarchy of society.
On the contrary, enjoyable job keeps an individual motivated and entertained resulting in his work progress. If he enjoys his job, he would feel less burden while working and brings better practicing in work. In a recent survey, for example, people enjoying their job were found better practicing their job helping one another in their job place which made them more social and everyone were enjoying being around them.
To summarize, although earning higher helps an individual to fulfill his desires , the benefits of the job done enjoying overweighs the job carried out for money purpose. Overall, earning large sum of money will fulfill the physical and social needs, but enjoying the job will fulfill the emotional needs of the individual.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'respect'
Suggestion: respect
... Moreover, everyone in the society will respects and believes on the businessman that wi...
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Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lps an individual to fulfill his desires , the benefits of the job done enjoying o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17770034843 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61303120892 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564459930314 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8735556901 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312892280298 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127510873549 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115198855551 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193696016944 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112985732045 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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