Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Modernization has played its part into influencing our day-to-day lives and choices. Many people these days believe that we have too many choices and I completely agree with this view. This essay shall try to support the above mentioned statement by considering the cases of clothes and food.
First of all, taking the case of clothing industry it is well known that fashion trends change almost on a daily basis. Everybody in these times is so concerned about his or her garbs that they want to try a variety of options and the current market is providing them with what they need. However, for those who prefer a simple living, this whole bundle of options seems a bit overwhelming. Instead of buying an attire that suits them, they are baffled by the choices available in the market and end up wasting their money on wrong product.
A similar barrage of choices pours onto a person when it comes to food and restaurants. With the growth of food industry as well as economy more food junctions are being opened everywhere. These new restaurants, in an attempt to gain customers, try and come up with innovations in dishes. However, doing so has its own demerits as it suppresses the originality of the existing dish. Besides, these innovations do not always turn out to be good and hence the buyer can never be sure if his choice of food will be good or bad.
Conclusively, it may be argued that having more options is always good as you can choose what you like. However, people's concern about drawbacks of too many choices cannot be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 246, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...rants, in an attempt to gain customers, try and come up with innovations in dishes. How...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, however, if, may, so, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73897058824 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53205818723 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1486397571 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.0714285714 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207238279154 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683929541543 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992213004403 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136721003356 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100436163808 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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