Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and the telephone have
changed the way that nations interact with each other ·in a global society. Choose another
technological innovation that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice
development in economical condition caused the major change worldwide. scientific community is tried to complete increasing need of community. needs of transportation and communication generated. they are the mother of different inventions like telephones. development of this type of inventions took long time and still they are developing. Before few centuries plane were used to communicate over large distance and for short distance telephones were used. These two have some disadvantanges like telephone was operated through wiring system and within two far distance countries telephones were not much useful. The data sharing was not possible through mobiles.
some people needed to store their data because we cannot preserve books for for long time and sharing them was difficult. To find solution to this problem programmer scientist developed world wide Web(WWW). this can be called as internet. Web connecting world wide operating through computer. In 19 century first computer developed for counting and WWW was its advanced application. two major advantages of it was data share and new form of communication.
internet have lots of websites having data and we can access them any corner of the world. Previously scientific community faced problems accesing research of other scientist. All data is stored in cloud system so it don’t take space like books. we neither have problem of termites eating our data nor problem of sharing them with world.
we also talk or face time each other via internet. Mails are basically used to contact or chat. it is newest form of communication in 2oth century. Without telephones and planes we can contact with other person. Last but not least, online banking and trade are advanced applications of internet. this invention eased our life from various asptect. No boundry can stop this discovery. it became vital for living and to stand for competition.
After this holistic analysis, all points are in favor that internet proved its importance. Hense in conclusion technology is still developing but internet discovery was milestone.
- Many of the world s cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest 68
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- Marriages are bigger and more expensive nowadays than in the past. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative development? 60
- You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice. 60
- If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. 3
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46483180428 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83840157264 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605504587156 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8613930907 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.8214285714 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6785714286 20.6045352989 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.64285714286 5.45110844103 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114528853005 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030389137333 0.076458572812 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362041240692 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0599269223494 0.150856017488 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432507372651 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.2 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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