Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind that image.
In contemporary societies what truly is the perspective for all, an appealing image or the truth behind the image ?
The issues of portraying a strong image of growth and prosperity is not only an issue of modern governments by a long lasting truth of human nature. It is by far more disturbing in recent times as failed systems come up with their media antics with the aim of distorting the public image.
It could also be said that only when a society is true to itself can there be true progress since it is often said that a problem identified is a problem solved.
The act of cosmetic palliative measures is at it’s pick in African countries which are still struggling with rudimentary concerns, having their citizens suffer but yet in denial of the true nature of things. The government of some African and Asia countries are fond of creating an appealing image of their societies while they allow for inhabitable almost slave conditions for their people yet come out to claim a democratic and fast growing nation.
Although not limited to small countries, even big countries like the united states are not left out of creating a deceptive imagery of their countries as the president often comes out to speak of their so called booming economy yet their steel industry just fired hundred’s of worker due to incapacity.
It is important to note that for the benefit of all many a times leaders have to take the position of creating an appealing image of a country so as to have a good standing in the eyes of all and to be in good competition.
Ultimately, while it might not seem moral and fair to all, it is important for governments and societies to create an appealing image of their society as they will be judged by all on that basis.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 144, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...reating an appealing image of a country so as to have a good standing in the eyes of all...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 311.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71061093248 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66283470979 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530546623794 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.421255079 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.777777778 118.986275619 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5555555556 23.4991977007 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203543650912 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970205841896 0.0831039109588 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.092468402813 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114339969556 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967563946075 0.0667264976115 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 48.8420337079 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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