Psychology
In an overview, the lecture describes the psychologist's duty and relationship between human mind and social behaviour. Admittedly, the points in the lecture cast doubt on the points in the reading.
First, the lecture states that psychology is a social science and studies overall processes mental activity and how this process influence human behaviour and society. However, in the reading mention psychology is a natural science that related to the sensory aspects of human behavior.
Furthermore, the lecture mentions that psychology is based on the subjective interpretation of phenomena and on knowledge of description. Also structure experiments to gain data and examine dates for find out pattern of behaviours. Thus, this opposes with the clues of the reading that illustrate psychology is base on the objectively verified facts and application of scientific method.
Finally, lecture explains subfields of psychology study is the interaction of mental processes and social behaviour. Also, all common threat in all these subfields is the integration of these subfields. But, this contrasts with the subject in the reading of psychology study the biological bases of behavior and mental states.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'psychologists'' or 'psychologist's'?
Suggestion: psychologists'; psychologist's
... an overview, the lecture describes the psychologists duty and relationship between human min...
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Line 9, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e subjective interpretation of phenomena and on knowledge of description. Also st...
^^
Line 9, column 140, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...omena and on knowledge of description. Also structure experiments to gain data and ...
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Line 9, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or find out pattern of behaviours. Thus, this opposes with the clues of the readi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 22.412803532 40% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 1373.03311258 76% => OK
No of words: 183.0 270.72406181 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68852459016 5.08290768461 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02010344427 2.5805825403 117% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 145.348785872 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546448087432 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 419.366225166 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5201744181 49.2860985944 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.1 110.228320801 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 21.698381199 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 7.06452816374 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284461236524 0.272083759551 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121889460275 0.0996497079465 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101185034957 0.0662205650399 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170676731435 0.162205337803 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989675562958 0.0443174109184 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.3589403974 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.8541721854 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.2367328918 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.42419426049 119% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.